My best purchase.

 XBOX GOOD,(Final version).

I vividly recall when I acquired my new Xbox console, the great day was on "the hot sale" that offered many sales in various products.

Before making my purchase online, I decided to visit some supermarkets because I desired to purchase this new console, which was the newest product of Microsoft, I went to Bodega Aurrera where I found it for the lowest price that I couldn't believe until I checked if it was real, and it was, so I asked an employer where the console was to take it. Then, I asked for the price, which was five thousand three hundred pesos, but the employer also told me that it wasn't available in the store only online. I was down because I thought I would have wait more time before I gain it.

In the end, I bought the console online because I really wish it. Anyway, I had to wait for two weeks until its arrival, I received an email to check if the product was delivered in the right address and in the right time. So, I was thrilled because I already had my console on my hands that I started playing for many hours.

As an extra fact, I acquired the console lower than the original price in the store from five thousand three hundred pesos to four thousand three hundred pesos.

First version (draft).

I vividly recall when I acquired my new Xbox console, the great day was on "the hot sale" that offered many sales in a lot of products.

Before buying online, I decided to visit some supermarkets because I desired to purchase this new cosole, whicht was the newest product of Microsoft, I went to Bodega Aurrera where I found it for the lowest price that I couldn't belive until I checked if it was real, and it was, so I asked an employer where the console was to take it. Then, I asked for the price, whicht was five thousand three hundred pesos, but the employer also told me that it wasn't available in the store only online. I was down because I thought I would have wait more time before I gain it.

In the end, I bought the console online because I really wisht it. Anyway, I had to wait for two weeks to play with it, the time went out until it arrived, I recived an email to check if the product was delivered in the right address and in the right time. So, I was thrilled because I already had my console on my hands that I started playing for many hours.

As an extra fact, I acquired the console lower than the original price in the store from five thousand three hundred pesos to four thousand three hundred pesos.