First version (draft).
If you ask me, these two things are important in the life. By using money you can get a good lifestyle but the cost of living might be more expensive than you think, this depends on how you can balance your money.
About time, it is important because you need it to get all you want while you spend your money.
I used to prefer money instead of time, but after hearing people's opinions, I changed my mind because I need time if I want to have all I want.
Final version.
In my point of view, both time an money are important in life. Money enables you to afford a good life style, however the cost of living can be harder than you expect, but this depends on how you handle your money. Time, on the other hand, it's crucial to achieve all your desires by spending money. I prioritized money over time, anyway after considering other people's opinions, I've realized how important the time is.
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